Food is an important part of all our lives, we wouldn't be able to survive and live without it . food can bring people together. When I try to get food I look for two things first is the price of the food and then the I look for the taste, I wish I could just but all the food in the world and just eat it. Food make every culture different because we can eat different food or even eat food differently. Like when I go back to japan we don't usually use forks and knives we use chopsticks everyday even when we eat toast we still use chopsticks I've even seen people eat pizza with chopsticks. In japan the food is prepared and taste different. In America a lot of people eat beef in japan mostly people eat Fish. Also when I eat in japan I'm used to the American size but japan doesn't have the same size as American food it's much smaller because Japanese people don't eat as much as Americans can eat. Idk really why Japanese eat less maybe because they find it more healthy. Food and love are the most scared things on earth but most people say money and love, but your not born to like money, as a child u didn't even know how important money was , but we knew how important food was if we didn't have it. People can survive without money because money is just an idea that people created to make better trades for goods. So in my opinion food is scared because it's in every culture it makes people who they are sometimes because they eat differently or they prepare food differently.
Wednesday, September 22, 2010
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Yuuki,
ReplyDeleteSome strong ideas here - the contrast between Japan and the U.S., the relative importance of food and money.
Work with someone to make short coherent paragraphs that focus on one major idea each. Also use commas and avoid "IDK" sort of abbreviations.
This would have been a good first draft - in this form it fails to meet the standard for a post from you.
Yukki,
ReplyDeleteI would be glad to read your blog posts before you submit them. you can send them to my email address-melissa.sof@gmail.com.
I enjoyed your viewpoint on the difference in cultures, food size, utensils,and habits. It was difficult to read though; it is important for you to think of this work as a paper that has undergone some revisions before posting.
Melissa