Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Food is an important part of all our lives, we wouldn't be able to survive and 
live without it . food  can bring  people together. When I try to get food I 
look for two things first is the price of the food and then the I look for the 
taste, I wish I could just but all the food in the world and just eat it. Food 
make every culture different because we can eat different food or even eat food 
differently. Like when I go back to japan we don't usually use forks and knives 
we use chopsticks everyday even when we eat toast we still use chopsticks I've 
even seen people eat pizza with chopsticks. In japan the food is prepared and 
taste different. In America a lot of people eat beef in japan mostly people eat 
Fish. Also when I eat in japan I'm used to the American size but japan doesn't 
have the same size as American food it's much smaller because Japanese people 
don't eat as much as Americans can eat. Idk really why Japanese eat less maybe 
because they find it more healthy. Food and love are the most scared things on 
earth but most people say money and love, but your not born to like money, as a 
child u didn't even know how important money was , but we knew how important 
food was if we didn't have it. People can survive without money because money is 
just an idea that people created to make better trades for goods. So in my 
opinion food is scared because it's in every culture it makes people who they 
are sometimes because they eat differently or they prepare food differently.

2 comments:

  1. Yuuki,

    Some strong ideas here - the contrast between Japan and the U.S., the relative importance of food and money.

    Work with someone to make short coherent paragraphs that focus on one major idea each. Also use commas and avoid "IDK" sort of abbreviations.

    This would have been a good first draft - in this form it fails to meet the standard for a post from you.

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  2. Yukki,

    I would be glad to read your blog posts before you submit them. you can send them to my email address-melissa.sof@gmail.com.

    I enjoyed your viewpoint on the difference in cultures, food size, utensils,and habits. It was difficult to read though; it is important for you to think of this work as a paper that has undergone some revisions before posting.

    Melissa

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