Sunday, October 31, 2010

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Thesis statement: Todays generation knows what is wrong with our diet and what 
goes into our food, but cant afford or even have it available like the products 
they try to avoid.

Intro: when we walk into our local super market everything is packed with sugar 
and other kinds of ingredients that are inside our food. We used to know where 
our meat comes from but now the industry refuse to even put labeling from where 
the meat. We think as more and more technology grows it would be healthier to 
eat. The industry says its personal choice on rather if you want to eat there 
food our not, but its hard when our world is filled with commercial that 
advertise the unhealthy and dont give use the alternative product. Todays 
generation know what wrong with our diet and whats goes into our food, but 
cant afford or even have it available like the products they try to avoid.

Body #1: McDonalds pioneered the happy meal, McDonalds  tries to see how he 
society is living once there is a trend in food McDonald tries to follow Rhodes 
trends to is gets harder for people to sway to q different food.

Body # 2 : we the people choose what we eat when we buy it. When we but food 
it's like placing a vote toward the companies. If we start buying other products 
That are healthy.

Body # 3: to change how the world eats we have to start eating at different 
places instead of fast food and non organic products, we need to shop at the 
right places and get organic food. If we start eating differently.

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